EMILY It was a cold, dark terrifying night. When I was near the mystery house I saw the lightning breaking bricks. Once I opened the dirty wooden door of the house. There were small black bats flying around. The house was quite big but scary. I was thinking what it would be like to live here. I could smell smoke coming from outside. I shivered nervously. I didn’t know what was going to happen. I was planning to leave but I remembered I didn’t have any transport to take me around. The first night was awful I had frightening nightmares and I woke up in the middle of the night, suddenly I saw…..
Gurjaipaul In the dark I saw a gate making noises. I opened the gate and the gate creaked. I Touched a glass, I Smelled a witch's dirty hat. I saw a skeleton. I heard a scary laugh. I felt scared.
MINA When I work up from a deep sleep I found myself in a dark and creepy forest and I kept on running until I saw an enormous castle so I started to go to the castle but when I got there I saw two bats hanging on a tree branch. When I knocked on the door nobody answered but the door still opened making a creaking voice. I felt a bit scared. When I went in the dark and gloomy palace I saw a portrait of a witch with a black and white cat I thought is this a witch castle. Suddenly I heard somebody come in so I quickly hid behind a large table and then I saw a witch with a black and white cat but then I realised that I forgot my bag on the front of the door and the witches’ cat saw it and took it to the witch then the witch said ‘’ somebody is in the castle.’’ Then a bit of lightning came and burnt the table and then the witch saw me and asked ‘‘is this your bag ’’and I couldn’t answer because I was too frightened. The witch started to cook her meal and I felt that I was one of the ingredient of her recipe. I don’t know what happened NEXT because I was eaten away.
HANAAN Once it was a dark stormy night then I shivered terribly after I walked up the steep steps then gargantuently I screamed AHHHH!then I ran as fast as quick silver and viciously I broke the door then I said WOW! there was beautiful stuff every were so I tried to take all of the and put it all home then the ghosts came back and said"were's all our gold gone" so then the ghosts went to my ginormous house they searched the whole house but there wasnt any gold because I hid it very well so then the ghosts screamed and destroyed the whole house.
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ReplyDeleteIt was a cold, dark terrifying night. When I was near the mystery house I saw the lightning breaking bricks. Once I opened the dirty wooden door of the house. There were small black bats flying around. The house was quite big but scary. I was thinking what it would be like to live here. I could smell smoke coming from outside. I shivered nervously. I didn’t know what was going to happen. I was planning to leave but I remembered I didn’t have any transport to take me around. The first night was awful I had frightening nightmares and I woke up in the middle of the night, suddenly I saw…..
Gurjaipaul
ReplyDeleteIn the dark I saw a gate making noises. I opened the gate and the gate creaked. I Touched a glass, I Smelled a witch's dirty hat. I saw a skeleton. I heard a scary laugh. I felt scared.
MINA
ReplyDeleteWhen I work up from a deep sleep I found myself in a dark and creepy forest and I kept on running until I saw an enormous castle so I started to go to the castle but when I got there I saw two bats hanging on a tree branch. When I knocked on the door nobody answered but the door still opened making a creaking voice. I felt a bit scared. When I went in the dark and gloomy palace I saw a portrait of a witch with a black and white cat I thought is this a witch castle.
Suddenly I heard somebody come in so I quickly hid behind a large table and then I saw a witch with a black and white cat but then I realised that I forgot my bag on the front of the door and the witches’ cat saw it and took it to the witch then the witch said ‘’ somebody is in the castle.’’ Then a bit of lightning came and burnt the table and then the witch saw me and asked ‘‘is this your bag ’’and I couldn’t answer because I was too frightened. The witch started to cook her meal and I felt that I was one of the ingredient of her recipe.
I don’t know what happened NEXT because I was eaten away.
HANAAN
ReplyDeleteOnce it was a dark stormy night then I shivered terribly after I walked up the steep steps then gargantuently I screamed AHHHH!then I ran as fast as quick silver and viciously I broke the door then I said WOW! there was beautiful stuff every were so I tried to take all of the and put it all home then the ghosts came back and said"were's all our gold gone" so then the ghosts went to my ginormous house they searched the whole house but there wasnt any gold because I hid it very well so then the ghosts screamed and destroyed the whole house.