Literacy Homework due Friday, 23rd September
Mystery Stories
Have a look at the setting above and imagine you are there. Write the introduction to a mystery story, using between 50 and 100 words. Think about describing the SENSES in your opening. What could you see, hear, smell? What did you touch and how did you feel?
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Tester
ReplyDeleteAs I crept into the dark and gloomy corridor I could feel the cold chill of the wind blow across my shoulders and I froze!
As I entered the creepy house I thought I saw a silhouette of a vampire. I was frightened that it might suck my blood. I could feel something breathing down my neck, it felt warm. As I turned around, there was nothing there. I tried to escape but the front door I had come in through had shut behind me and was now locked. My only choice was to carry on through the petrifying, dark, gloomy house...
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Aditya
ReplyDeleteThunder in the sky. I was at a spooky scary house it was cold, dark and frightening
Nithillan
ReplyDeleteAs I looked at the terrifying house thunder growled overhead lighting lashed in circles around me. Not a single bright area was to be found. I felt a cold wind as ice. As I go into the house Ravens screech and a witch laughed. Hahaha. I saw something shooting out of the chimney. Zoom. It left a green energy trail behind what was it? Soon I found out it was a witch on a broomstick and a ghost flying together impossible. All happened in one night.
I was lost in the dark, cold and very frightening woods. While I was walking on the cracked, wobbly and stony path, I heard a loud thunder and saw a bolt of lightning. All this made me extremely shocked and scared. Suddenly I came across the castle with tall towers and turrets. The castle was high up on the hill and looked creepy. The woods smelt of the rotten animals that made me sick.
ReplyDeleteby Kashvi
I can see lighting in the dark sky. I can see a really dark castle in the hill high above. My heart is racing very fast. I feel the wind blowing my whole body and moving me away.
ReplyDeleteOne day there was a petrifying noise. I went outside and there was a haunted, dark and huge castle.I was wondered about it. the castle was surrounded by graveyard's and tall,old tree the thunder storm was lighting the full moon sky.I was shivering with excitement my heart was beating extremely fast.When I get closer I could smell smelly witches,probably they didn't have a bath for a very long time...
ReplyDeleteSome excellent blogging work so far! Please remember that 50 - 100 words is enough to write a good sized paragraph.
ReplyDeleteHappy blogging!
Mr Goddard
EMILY
ReplyDeleteIt was a cold, dark terrifying night. When I was near the mystery house I saw the lightning breaking bricks. Once I opened the dirty wooden door of the house. There were small black bats flying around. The house was quite big but scary. I was thinking what it would be like to live here. I could smell smoke coming from outside. I shivered nervously. I didn’t know what was going to happen. I was planning to leave but I remembered I didn’t have any transport to take me around. The first night was awful I had frightening nightmares and I woke up in the middle of the night, suddenly I saw…..
I was walking along the pavement, suddenly I saw a big, dark and huge haunted castle. The wind swept across me and I was as cold as an ice cube. Then I decided to go inside to see what is in there, but as I was walking along, I saw a ghost and lots of vampires. I was so frightened that the vampires can smell my fear, so I run outside and I went back home quickly and silently.
ReplyDeleteAs I crept through the dark and spooky castle I heard a clap of thunder.It was raining very heavily. The lightning bolts made forest fires.I could smell all the dampness in the corners from one mile away.Then I saw button.I pressed it and it whizzed me down to a secret underground tunnel...
ReplyDeleteIt was dark and windy.I touched a wet bucket and I could smell smoke from the chimney. I heard an eagle calling for help. I saw a big haunted house. I felt scared and frightened. I was walking up the stairs and I was alone, but I was safe for now.... There were rocky steps....
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a little boy. He went for a walk but suddenly he found a trap door in the middle of the pavement so he opened the trap door. He saw a big portal so he scarily went in it and then he teleported to a dark night. There was a thunder coming down. Suddenly he saw a castle so he quickly ran in to it and he was terrified.
ReplyDeleteI was walking by myself when suddenly I saw a house which I have never seen before. I was scared but I went around that house. I heard a creak. The trees were swaying and the bricks were falling down. Some strange voice was saying "come in" , "come in" . I went up and up and I saw plenty of ghosts. There was billions of them. I run down and down and what happened next .......?
ReplyDeletewhen I Enter the house. I Saw dark and scare thire was no one.thire was no mum and dad , I could Not and it was very cold and thire was no food and He was
ReplyDeleteBY mustafa
Once there was a dark black house. As i walked in i saw a ghost that was floating around with a dark glow around its head. Then i quickly ran past the ghost because i saw a door. I didn't have the key to the door so i smashed it open then i kept on running till i could get off the road with the scary haunted house on it.
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adnan
ReplyDeleteIt was halloween night, I was playing trick and treat with my friends and I saw a tall, dark and scary castle. I stood there staring at it while my friends left me behind. As I turned around a bat flew over me and went inside the castle. In few minutes lightning happened and I got so scared that I left and ran away from this mystery castle.
ReplyDeleteIn the dark,gloomy haunted house, there was Halloween pumpkins and lots of other Haunted stuff.I felt scared then I ran away.
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