Blogging homework due Friday, 25th November
Legends
Use the picture below as inspiration to write a legendary story. It should be no more than 100 words.
Remember to include:
Remember to include:
- correct punctuation and capital letters
- past tense
- adverb sentence starters
- detailed description of character and setting
- similes
- a reward
- speech
Gurjaipaul
ReplyDeleteOne stormy day, the thunder was growling. It was raining that day, but who could destroy a hero in this kind of weather, lets see what will happen in the story.
Once upon a time, there was a hero called Aduro, who was a good old wizard of Avantia and King Hugo's wizard!
Aduro was getting ready to fight a ferocious, gargantuas and evil dragon. This dragon was his 10th dragon, which he fought. " When I will get that beast, I will destroy it", said Aduro. He sets off to the Ruby Desert to fight the dragon and save Avantia.
A great use of speech. Remember legend stories are in past tense.
DeleteJulia
ReplyDeleteonce there was a big as a house dragon and there was a little man the man one day thought that he could get the scary dragon and try and kill the dragon but then he thought that it will not be easy to try and put it in the cave or something the little man quickly as a mouse he wanted to fight the dragon so he wanted to kill it the scary and gioomy
You have set the scene well. Please use capital letters and full stops even when typing your work up.
DeleteA log time ago, lived a handsome, strapping and fears Prince. His name was Joe he lived in palace called Asgard. His palace was invaded by a dragon, named Vincent, The master of Hell. Prince Joe, said "Everybody hide. "And all guards eyes on watch out." The dragons - hell guards, were shooting flame arrows at the huge castle. And the guards were shooting back. All guards died and the Prince and the Dragon had a recking war. The Prince won and now he is a king. THE END !!
ReplyDeleteA great attempt at using speech, you just missed one set of inverted commas out. I like the way you are trying to use commas to add information into your sentence.
DeleteYears ago there was a young, charming boy named Joseph. One dark night the enormous evil dragon took over the palace and wanted to rule the kingdom. Fearless Joseph decided to have a battle with the dragon. Joseph called the people of the kingdom to the palace and said “who will join the battle with him” most people said “no” they were frightened to fight. But this didn’t stop him! he still went ahead with the battle. Joseph and small army practiced on different weapons to kill the dragon. It didn’t take long for Joseph to kill the dragon he was the greatest warrior.
DeleteOne day a large dragon was scaring the little man. Once the large dragon was getting scaryer and scaryer and the little man got scared every day. Every one day the little man every time hits the dragon in the tummy. Then on the next day the little man done it again. Then on the next day the little man got a reward and his reward was the new kings crown sparkling like gold.
ReplyDeleteLovely variety in how you change your sentence starters, Karina. Just remember that you swap a y for and i with an er ending e.g. happier not happyer.
DeleteGeorge and the Dragon
ReplyDeleteOnce there was a man called George, he was 18 and a half years old. George loved standing near the cliff and the beach but he disliked dragons. Dragons always fed on mammals and they were gigantic with sharp long claws, wide webbed wings and spikey thick tail. One day his bad luck came, he was shocked as a zebra that was going to be eaten by a lion. The fearless George went where the dragon lived in a cave near the greenish blue sea. He ordered, “Do not ever come and terrorised my kind and humble people. If I saw you anywhere near my village then I would not spare your life.” Quickly the dragon flew away in a flash while everyone was cheering in the village.
by Kashvi
What a great attempt at using speech! I also love the extra detail of how old George was. Just remember you can't speak in past tense so this actually breaks the past tense rule - it's tricky!
DeleteThe legend of Steve and the Spider
ReplyDeleteYears ago, there was a young and intelligent archer named Steve. He set off towards Spain. There he found a colossal lake where a ferocious spider lived. The spider was
terrorising the people of the country wanting to gobble them up. They fed, flies and left overs to stop eating them.
The spider had caught the King. The reward was 30,000 emeralds. Steve ran to the cave and saw the King waiting to be saved.
When he cut the silk the spider heard him and screeched. He struck the beast with his dagger but it broke. He used his emergency arrow and shot him right at the four legs.
Nithilan
I really like the way you have taken the powerful language from the story we learnt and used it to describe your spider's actions.
DeleteOnce upon a time on a dark thundery day the kingdom of sinthia was attacked by an army of dragons. The sky was overcastted with clouds with moments of lightning breaking the darkness. The people of sinthia were very frightened of the dragons. The head of the dragon army was a ferocious dragon that roared menacingly. He has massive big wings that shuffled loudly. His body was covered with spiky scales. His claws were as sharp as knives. Everybody was hoping that Jeff the knight could defeat the dragon army with his courage and mighty sword. Jeff was the head of army of king Gordius. Jeff was a brave, wise and a virtuous knight. He has never lost any battle and the people of sinthia were counting on him to get them out of this situation, So they can live a peaceful life.
ReplyDeleteby Armaan Brar
Many years ago there lived a little boy who was called Jake. Jake was a type of boy who could save people of the village from, any beasts that entered their village. One day when thunder rumbled a dragon appeared on top of the village flying like a bird out of control, the dragon blew fire straight at houses and the people got terrified that they would get burnt by the dragon’s fire. Eventually the queen had found out that the dragon was destroying the village. The queen gave a speech that said ‘’who ever defeats the dragon will be rewarded with 10 bags of gold.’’ So Jake set off to find the dragon, when he got there the dragon was so fearsome that even Jake got a bit scared. Jake got his sword out and when the dragon wasn’t looking he slay it right in his heart, then the dragon fell on the ground and Jake was rewarded as promised.
ReplyDeleteMina
Years ago there was a young, charming boy named Joseph. One dark night the enormous evil dragon took over the palace and wanted to rule the kingdom. Fearless Joseph decided to have a battle with the dragon. Joseph called the people of the kingdom to the palace and said “who will join the battle with him” most people said “no” they were frightened to fight. But this didn’t stop him! he still went ahead with the battle. Joseph and small army practiced on different weapons to kill the dragon. It didn’t take long for Joseph to kill the dragon he was the greatest warrior.
ReplyDeleteThe story of a prince Derek and a dragon.
ReplyDeleteMany,many years ago there lived a charming and handsome prince Derek. One day the prince was walking along, and he saw a dark,spiky and enormous dragon who was attacking the shining and beautiful girl named Serina. She had golden and long hair and she was screaming as loud as an explosion. Prince Derek was running to help the girl. When he got there, he realized that the dragon was taller and scarier then he imagined. The prince Derek bravely took his sword out from behind his back and jumped on the dragon's back and he cut his head off. The girl was really pleased and smiled at him.
The Legend of Latiera and the DEMON DRAGON!!!
ReplyDeleteTen centuries ago,there lived a fair girl called Latiera who was not famous...that time. Also there lived a vile DRAGON a few towns away from Latiera. The people had been feeding the beastly dragon,dead pigs from the farms so the dragon woudn't eat them.One rainy day,when the pigs had run out, the deadly dragon chased the people wanting to feast upon them.Unluckily the demonic dragon had caught the stunning princess of the land!The demon dragon took the princess to it's dark and gloomy cave and had been planning what to eat her with.The Queen had offered her the treasury.She went to the cave and freed the princess.She took her sword and struck it .the sword broke but the peces killed it.
A long time ago there was a brave warrior. He could stop waves with his bear finger. He had the strength of 50 men and the courage of 100 men.His name was Prince the sea stopper.He was the kings strongest knight.And when ever he verses the ferocious dragon he always wins.But this time he lost but did not give up.
ReplyDeleteBack in the days when the tigers ruled the earth, the world was as calm as a sleeping panda. Until one day when Tiger and Wigens, who were tiger brothers got separated from each other. Tiger had left their den to find some food but had not come back. Desperately, Wigens had waited but he had not returned. Wigens followed the path to find him and suddenly saw his brother trapped in King Crocodile’s bamboo cage. “TIGER”, Wigens screamed, “I am coming to get you out”. “NO YOU WON’T” sneered King Crocodile. King Crocodile launched himself at Wigens. Wigens bravely got his whistle and called for his army of monkeys. Swiftly, the monkeys took down King Crocodile and the brothers were re-united.
ReplyDeleteOnce there lived a brave and fearless knight who had the power of 50 men and had the courage of 100 men.The fearless knight could always defeat the terrifying dragon but this time he lost the battle but didn't give up he kept fighting till the end...
ReplyDeleteA long time ago, there lived a happy King in a secret castle village. He had a lots of soldiers and there was one of the best soldiers. He had a sharp , shiny and long scythe. He didn`thave a helmet and that`s how you could tell it`s him. He also had a cape that was black. His name was Harry and he was married with young, beatifull and intelligent princes.
ReplyDeleteOne day a gargantuan dragon came to take the princes. The dragon was as gargantuan as three giants standing on top of each other. Suprisingly, that night took the princes. Suddenly, Harry woke up at 5 am and immediately went of to save the princes. When he arrived there he found the princes waiting to be eaten. He sneaked next to the dragon and untide the chain. He let the beautiful princes go.
When the brave Knight let the princes go, he stabed the dragon with his scythe. The powerful dragon didn`t care he just said "Ouch". Next the dragon tried to kick Harry , but Harry was too fast and avoided the dragon`s leg. Harry through his dagger at the dragon`s head and the dragon limply felt to the ground. After that Harry was rewarded with a special crystal trophy.
The story of Harry Potter and Lord Voldemort
ReplyDeleteyears ago there was a 18 year old boy called Harry Potter.Harry Potter was a much loved person.Once he was sitting on the seat at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft an Wizardry until tragedy struck when Lord Voldemort snuck up in Diagon Alley killed 15 people and the leftovers asked Harry if he could defeat Lord Voldemort so he went to Diagon Alley so he got his and so did Lord Voldemort and they battled each other and Harry gained more and more strength and he defeated Lord Voldemort and he shouted as loud as 5000 v12 engines revving as Lord Voldemort vanished away. THE END!!!!! By Adnan