We have received another letter from Bebop the alien? Please could you write your response to the letter on the blog. Bebop would like you to tell him all about your daily routine here on Earth. What sort of things do you like doing? Remember to write in chronological (time) order and to use your time adverbials (Firstly, later, then, next, afterwards, soon, meanwhile, whilst, a short while later, etc)
Dear Children,
My name is Bebop and I am from the planet Boogie.
Boogie Land seems very different from your planet! Let me run you through a typical day on Boogie Land. Firstly, we are woken up at 6am by a bright green laser that flashes into our bedrooms. After that, we attach ourselves to the electronic recharger for five minutes so that we have energy for the day. A little while later, we wash ourselves with Boogie Cleaning Fluid and an old rag. Sometimes, if we feel a bit creaky, we have to oil our joints. We always feel as good as new afterwards! Next, we hop onto our spaceships and get to work fixing stars and planets. We don't stop until the evening. Finally, at 7pm, we leap aboard our sleeping stations and drift away into the land of nod.
I like it here but I am getting a bit bored. I want to travel the world and see other planets. I keep looking at your planet on the internet and it looks great. Tell me more about it please. I want to know what you do each day. What do you eat and how do you get around?
Please write back, who knows I might come and visit one day!
Regards
Bebop a Lula
Dear Bebop A Lula,my name is Anika. I am from the planet Earth we have different types of weather here - rainy,sunny,snowy and sometimes cloudy.Earth is a beautiful place with plenty of food and water.Monday to Friday I go to school and Saturday and Sunday I have holiday so I can do anything I want.I eat curries. your sincerely Anika
ReplyDeleteAn excellent choice to describe the weather we have here.
DeleteDear Bebop,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kashvi and I’m from Earth, the strange thing you see from your planet. I live with my parents and older sister. You might wonder what life is on our planet, well it is similar to yours.
Firstly, I wake up at 6.45am and get ready. Next I quickly go downstairs to have breakfast which gives me energy. Then I need to drop my older sister to school in the car. Afterwards I get dropped off to my school by car or walk, sometimes I am late so I have to rush crazily. Then my teacher teaches us science, literacy and maths during the day from Monday to Friday. Finally I finish school at 3.35pm. On the weekends, I have to finish my homework, after that I play with my games or watch tv. Later on I have my dinner and thereafter I get ready to go to sleep.
Life here is very interesting and fabulous but never boring. Bebop I will be happy to see you soon.
Best wishes
Kashvi
A very detailed account of your day - well done!
DeleteDear Bebop,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Karina.I wake up at 7am. After, I brush my teeth and have a shower.Then, I get changed in my school uniform. Afterwords, I have my breakfast. Later, I leave my house to go to school at 8:30. Finally, at 3:30 my mum comes to pick me up. When I arrive home I chill out then I do my homework then go to bed.
Regards
Karina
You've used lots of time adverbials - super!
DeleteHANAAN
ReplyDelete1.As I walked in the frighting house i saw a flying picture of a doll that smiled evilly.
2.As i walked through the fearsome and dark forest i came across a werewolf howling on the mountain.
3.In a dark cave i saw moving shadows in the distance, but when i walked to look around i couldn't find anything...
4.In the quiet streets of Downing Street I saw men gathered around a small fire, all of them looking at me...
5.In a small farm i saw all animals sleeping but i came across a shadow that didn't look like a normal shadow...
6.In a small cottage i was eating alone but when i looked up i saw a beast as big as a werewolf...
HANAAN6 October 2016 at 20:19
ReplyDelete1.As I walked in the frighting house i saw a flying picture of a doll that smiled evilly.
2.As i walked through the fearsome and dark forest i came across a werewolf howling on the mountain.
3.In a dark cave i saw moving shadows in the distance, but when i walked to look around i couldn't find anything...
4.In the quiet streets of Downing Street I saw men gathered around a small fire, all of them looking at me...
5.In a small farm i saw all animals sleeping but i came across a shadow that didn't look like a normal shadow...
6.In a small cottage i was eating alone but when i looked up i saw a beast as big as a werewolf...
HANAAN
ReplyDeleteOnce it was a dark stormy night then I shivered terribly after I walked up the steep steps then gargantuently I screamed AHHHH!then I ran as fast as quick silver and viciously I broke the door then I said WOW! there was beautiful stuff every were so I tried to take all of the and put it all home then the ghosts came back and said"were's all our gold gone" so then the ghosts went to my ginormous house they searched the whole house but there wasnt any gold because I hid it very well so then the ghosts screamed and destroyed the whole house.
HANAAN
ReplyDeleteOnce it was a dark stormy night then I shivered terribly after I walked up the steep steps then gargantuently I screamed AHHHH!then I ran as fast as quick silver and viciously I broke the door then I said WOW! there was beautiful stuff every were so I tried to take all of the and put it all home then the ghosts came back and said"were's all our gold gone" so then the ghosts went to my ginormous house they searched the whole house but there wasnt any gold because HANAAN
Once it was a dark stormy night then I shivered terribly after I walked up the steep steps then gargantuently I screamed AHHHH!then I ran as fast as quick silver and viciously I broke the door then I said WOW! there was beautiful stuff every were so I tried to take all of the and put it all home then the ghosts came back and said"were's all our gold gone" so then the ghosts went to my ginormous house they searched the whole house but there wasnt any gold because I hid it very well so then the ghosts screamed and destroyedHANAAN
Once it was a dark stormy night then I shivered terribly after I walked up the steep steps then gargantuently I screamed AHHHH!then I ran as fast as quick silver and viciously I broke the door then I said WOW! there was beautiful stuff every were so I tried to take all of the and put it all home then the ghosts came back and said"were's all our gold gone" so then the ghosts went to my ginormous house they searched the whole house but there wasnt any gold because I hid it very well so then the ghosts screamed and destroyed the whole house. the whole house.I hid it very well so then the ghosts screamed and destroyed the whole house.
Emily
ReplyDeleteDear Bebop,
I’m writing to tell you how days are going in my planet. Firstly when I have woken up by an alarm which makes a cookoo sound. Next I clean myself with cranberry flavoured liquid. Afterwards I get changed so I am ready to go anywhere. Of course I need breakfast so I have energy for the day. Later on the children have to go to school at 08:30am. In my school and all the other schools we always do the register to make sure the teachers know we are here then normally we do handwriting.
Sometimes we might have assembly depending on the day. After assembly if we have one we do guided reading if we don’t have assembly we move on to guided reading. Next we do literacy until it is break time, break times are usually 15minuets. We finish literacy off then we start maths. The teacher teaches us one group at a time and the others have to do holding tasks which is a worksheet. While the teacher is teaching you can’t interrupt them if you finish the holding task you practice timetables. After that we eat delicious food for lunch.
When it finishes the whistle will blow, you stand still until the second whistle blows to go to your line. Then the teacher will collect you and we will do geography, science and outdoor learning if it is Monday. On my planet we travel in cars, buses, motorbikes, planes, coaches and more. We have massive verity of foods like fruit, bread, vegetables and ect. When you come to my planet I will show you around my other activities. I hope you are excited to see. That’s all I am going to talk about now I am very excited to know more from your reply.
From: Emily
Excellent use of time adverbials and all in a chronological order - super homework, Emily!
DeleteDear Bebop,
DeleteMy name is Aditya I live on planet Earth. Earth has very lovely weather. What I do everyday is Monday to Friday I go school and Saturday and Sunday I have a day of. So I do important thing`s. SO normally in the week but not Sunday and Saturday I do this. First I wake up at 7.30. Then I brush my teeth then I get ready for breakfast I have cereal. Next I have a bath. finally I change in to my uniform and later I walk to school
Dear Bebop
ReplyDeleteI have read your letter and now I will tell you about my daily life routine. So first, I wake up in the morning and go down stairs and watch TV while my mum makes breakfast. For breakfast I like to eat toast with a hot chocolate. After that I go down up stairs to brush my teeth and wash my face then I get dressed to go to school. A little while later I am at the front door ready to go to school.
I walk to school with my mum or dad and sister. At school, I learn about maths and English. At break I play with my friends Krystian, Filip, Hanan, Mateen and Rajan. We play games such as It and Spies. After school, I go home and play swingball. After that I eat my dinner. My favourite dinner is Southern Fried Chicken. Afterwards I have a bath and go to bed.
So I hope I have told you a lot about my daily routine.
Regards Tom
1.Jeff heard a petrifying noise out side his window.
ReplyDelete2.Behind him, he heard a scary laugh.
3.He saw shadows in the darkness .
4.Jeff felt spikes like jagged daggers.
5. Glowing eyes staring at him whilst he shivered in his skin.
6.Suddenly!!!It was gone...
Armaan
ReplyDeleteIn my blue dream jar you can find:
a colourful butterfly dancing around the flower
I saw a parrot swooping across my garden
I saw a white sea of doves near the beach
I saw a blue cloudy sky in my dreams
there was a shinny glowing stone in the river
and this all was a gift from santa
Dear Bebop,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Rajan and I am from the planet earth.
Earth is very different to boogie land. Let me tell you about a day on earth. Firstly we are woken up by an alarm at 7:00 by a clock. After that, we do our brush and get dressed. A little while later, I eat my yummy breakfast of egg and bread for energy, then a short while later we walk to school and do our handwriting. Next we do our guided reading. Afterwards we do mile of the day. Next, we go to lunch and eat bread and cheese. Soon, we have outdoor learning. Finally, we walk home. Whilst, mom makes dinner I play and watch T.V. Then, its time to go to sleep and go to bed at 9pm.
Please come one day soon.
From Rajan
Dear Bebop
ReplyDeleteI want to tell you about my daily routine.Firstly I wake up as my dad calls 'Dheeksha! Its time to get up '.After that I go downstairs and drink hot boost.Meanwhile I talk to my mummy .Next I rush upstairs and brush my teeth.Afterwards I get ready to take shower .Then I clean myself and put cream. After I get dressed up I have my breakfast.I like Indian food and all other foods in the UK.I like drawing and colouring. I think it gives good exercise .Later I get ready to go to school . Whilst I go to school I feel excited.Soon in the evening I come and do my homework.It is fun.A short while later I eat my Indian food for dinner.Finally I get ready to go to bed.
I hope to see you some day and visit me .See you soon.
Yours sincerely
Dheeksha.
28 Stanley road Hounslow TW28RH Midllesex
ReplyDeleteDear Bebop, my name is Nithilan and I am seven years old. My short name is Nithi. I am going to tell you a simple school day routine first I get woken up by my mum or dad. Then I brush my teeth and go downstairs to eat breakfast. After that I go upstairs have a bath, put my clothes on, go downstairs put my socks if need to and put my shoes on and go to school.
In the classroom we do handwriting whilst we wait. Whilst handwriting we do the register.
yours sincerly,
Nithilan
Dear Bebop
ReplyDeleteI am writing to tell you about my daily routine. I wake up in the morning at 7:30 am and go to the bathroom to brush my teeth and sometimes I have a shower , to make me fresh. After I get out of the bathroom, I wait for my mum to prepare breakfast. When I finish breakfast, I dress up into my school uniform and wait for my dad to get ready to take me to school. At 8:30 we leave to go to school.
When I arrive at 8:45 everyone does handwriting for 15 minutes until 9:00. We then do Literacy until break which is at 10:25. In break I play with my friends: Filip,Krystian, Tom, Hannan, Armaan, Mateen and Nithilan. We play " It and Spies ". After break, we carry on with our Literacy or do " Mile A Day ". Afterwards, we do Maths until 12:10. At lunch I play with my friends then we have lunch and play some more. When lunch finishes, we study Topic then Science until 3:35 which is our home time. I watch TV until I go to bed at 9:00.
Your's sincerely
Adnan
Dear Bebop,
ReplyDeleteI am writing to you about our morning.
Firstly our parents wake us up but we don't get charged. We sleep to get energy then we have breakfast to get our bodies running. Then if you have school you need to get ready at the right time or you'll be late. we also have p.e which stands for physical education it is basically where you learn sports
right now I'm learning gymnastics healthy eating and netball. my favourite is netball because I know how to shoot.
we also have assemblies.
hope you visit soon
Hanaan.
Dear Bebop,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Krystian and I am from the planet Earth. Earth seems very diffrent to Boogie Land, because we have trees, flowers and grass. Let me run you through a typical my day on Earth.
Firstly, I get up from my bed at 6am or 7am. Next I go down stairs and usualy see my brother and dad,they get up before me and I eat cereals for breakfast. A little while later I go and dress up to school. Then I go to school to meet my friends and learn. Next I go for a break and play with my friends. Sometimes if it rains we have golden time inside, when we play with a toys. Later I learn again and after I go to lunch. My favourite food is pizza. Soon we come back from lunch to our classrooms I have different activities like P.E. or history. Afterwards it is the end of the school and I go home.
Finally I can rest after a long day , watch TV and go to Judo club. After my dinner I go to sleep.
I hope you will visit me one day.
Yours sincerley,
Krystian
Mina
ReplyDeleteDear Bebop,
This is how I spend my day on Earth during week days. It may seem like a very busy day but I enjoy school and have lots of fun and relaxation in the weekends.
Firstly, I start my day at 7:30 am that’s when I wake up in the morning. Next, I go to the bathroom, wash my face, brush my teeth and change my cloths to my school uniform. My mother helps me to do my hairs and now I am all ready for the breakfast. Since I live very close to the school and I can see the school gates open therefore in the mean while I get some time to watch TV and my favourite programme early in the morning is Horrible Histories.
As soon as the school gate opens I am normally the first one to get in the school building. Then, the lessons starts with hand writing practice following by literacy lesson and also guided reading, when we finish this lesson we get our first break.
I play with my friends and sometimes we get to go on the field and we play on the climbing frame. This break is for only 20 mins and then we get back to our class and do some more learning such as numeracy. After lunch which is at 12:10 we get another break and then we ahead for ICT lesson. The school finishes at 15:30 and I get to be picked up by my mother and I am always very hungry so I keep asking my mum “what is for the dinner?”
Now that I am at home, I wash my hands, face and get changed again back into my home clothes and a short while later, I get my food and when I had finished my dinner I watch TV everyday but only until 17:00 pm. After, I had dinner I do my homework and learn my spellings, I spent 20 mins on Mathletics in addition to what I have learnt at school and finally, I read my reading book around 7:00 pm.
Toward the end of the day, I get to watch TV for half an hour and I like to watch transformer while I am having supper. Now I am so sleepy and tired that I brush my teeth as quickly as I can and I jump into my warm and snuggly bed but I’m never ever too tired to give a big hug and kiss to my mum.
Do write me back about your life and adventures on Mars. I’ll be looking forwards to hear from you.
from mina
Dear Bebop,
ReplyDeleteIn my land we first wake up and brush our teeth.
Then we get dressed.(I always have to be in my uniform.)
After that we brush our hair and we go down stairs to have some breakfast.
later we go to school and do:handwriting and guided reading.
We do lots until home time.
I eat something yummy and go to bed
Dear Bebob,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Filip I am from London, England.I am 7 years old,
I still go to school. Our days are different then yours.
At 7"am I wake up. Then I get dressed and sometimes i watch cartoons. After that I eat my breakfast, brush my teeth and go to school.
At school then we are learning handwriting, literacy, mathematics. A little while later, I go home and have a rest.
At home we have our tea, some days I go swimming club.Some times I have food be for going to bed.
Gurjaipaul
ReplyDeleteDear Bebop a Lula,
My name is Gurjaipaul and I am from the planet earth. I’m now about to tell you what I do all day. Firstly, I wake up at 7:30 AM. Then, I brush my teeth, have a shower, comb my hair and tie my Turban. After that, I have my breakfast and go to school. After a while, we all (at School) do handwriting. In handwriting we write 3 words in 2 rows and 3 sentences of 3 words. After, we do literacy. In literacy, we do lots of things for example: Legendry stories, poems, letters etc. Later, its break time, in break time we drink milk and play with friends. Sometimes, we do mile a day or we watch Newsround after break or in the afternoon. Then, we do Maths. In maths, we do lots of things for example: addition, subtraction, money etc. Then, it is lunch time, in lunch time we play and eat lunch. Then, in the afternoon we do lots of things like… then it is home time, at home time we go home and I have my lunch and watch TV. Then, I study and do my homework. Finally, we have dinner and go to sleep. I hope you know everything about me.
Regards
Gurjaipaul