Your homework this week is to write a paragraph for each picture explaining what has happened to make them react like this. Try to use SHOW not tell sentences to imply how the person is feeling.
The Head Teacher Is As angry as Miss Truchbull And The Little Boy Who Is innocent is paralysed with fear, Terror-Struck And He Feels Like He Is Trapped In the middle of a field with an enraged bull chasing him. The Head Teacher scares All the children and clenches his fist's And tries to hurt and offend the children.
Picture 1: The man was furious with his ears puffing with steam because his college was promoted and every one was talking about it. He worked so hard for the promotion.
picture 2 : The boy was paralysed for a minute ... his mother told him she is expecting triplets he was very shocked.
The man looks stressed and angry because some whon was not lisnining to him. He get’s so angry that he is red and his ear’s popped with smoke. He looks as some whon did a prank on him, then he got really angry that it looked as if it was a major problem. It was not normal to the head teacher to look like this.
This boy look’s as he as seen some thing, in a dream and it was a miracle, he was so surprised. He thought it was remarkable or he sees some think revolting or maybe a tyrannical kidnapping. Or some think that some whon was in jail or maybe he and his friend’s were in jail. Or around him there were guards that wonted to kill him. His friends or mum, dad, sister and brother, I was terrified what was happening.
His ears puffed out steam as he found out, that his friends tricked him. They told him, they are going to the meeting, but actually they went to the gallery he always wanted to go.
The little boy was standing outside his bedroom and looked really surprised. His eyes bulged, when he saw photo wallpaper with his favourite super hero on the wall next to his bed. He was really happy and couldn't believe it.
The man is really angry and the man is feeling sad and disapointed someone has made him feel really angry.He is looking like he is really furiouse about something.His face shows that he is disappointed.
The little boy looks realy suprised of something and he also looks really shoked maybe somebody gave him a big suprise or someone did something cool that he is suprised, shoked the boy doesn,t look like he is sad or un happy maybe someone gave him a suprise the boy has orange hair and i think he is feeling a little bit happy.
1. This is Mr Wright. He seems to be angry and agitated. the toilets in the school have been flooded three times this week. He feels he can’t get on top of this problem. This has made him edgy and flustered. This happens every week of every month. What shall he do now?
2. This is my friend Marty, he is in my class. Marty is the guy that sits in the back, and when he puts his hand up all you can see is his bright, curly, orange hair. His hair looks like a wig you can get from a party shop. All week he has been bragging on how he will sail through the test. I know that he has been revising for three weeks.
On the board, in our science class is written animals and human. Marty comes running up to me with his mouth wide open. I noticed his face had gone pale and his eye had gone much bigger, as the shock was evident on his face. He looked distressed. He whispered in my ear that he revised the wrong topic and struggled with this one the most!
THE MAN His ears puffed out smoke, he didn’t like the fact that people are talking and whispering about his size and weight He has a super annoying brother that stole his clock without his permission. He came downstairs, scolded his brother and left for work. As soon as he got there, his boss immediately called him to his office for a “little chat”. He thought something good is happening like he would get an award or get promoted. But instead, his boss screamed at the top of his lungs” YOUR LATE AND SOO YOUR FIRED!!!!” He felt so bad that no one can explain about how he feels.
THE BOY He just came back from school, it was his Birthday. His family got everything ready for a surprise. Just before he came in, they switched off the lights so he couldn’t see. He came in, it was so dark he nearly cried. They put on the lights and shouted “HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!!!” He was so shocked to see his family celebrating his birthday. when they were cutting the cake, his dog quickly jumped onto him, trying to say “happy birthday” in doggy language. But he forgot he was doing it rather than imagining it. And with a ginormous THUD!!!...... He opened his eyes, he thought he was in heaven. But when he saw one peek at his dog…He was speechless, he saw his dog on the cake. His dog broke the cake into half, even the table it was on. But he kept quite….
Emily First picture: He knew he was going to get fired. Why did he do it? He smashed his desk with anger and more sweat trickled down his forehead. His ears puffed with big, grey smoke cloud and his eyebrows narrowed in irritation. His fingernails dug into his palms in rage leaving a mark. His mouth opened wide and a treacherous, loud shriek came out.
Second picture: He couldn’t believe it! All this time the dog was there and now he was adopted. His eyes were filling with tears with unhappiness. His ginger curly hair was starting to itch a bit. He had to be happy for the dog but it was hard. Later that day, he was shocked trying to think what happened to the poor dog. Whatever happened, he kept looking outside imagining their mouths smiling in the park.
In a school names 'Clever Workers' was a teacher named Mr.Grumpy, the disgusting rude teacher. One day during lunch when Mr.Grumpy went into the kitchen to get his dinner , he found a boy and his friends carefully taking Mr.Grumpy's scrumptious creamy chocolate cake on a silver plate wanting to eat it. Mr.Grumpy's ears burst with steam when he say Tony , his nephew giving instructions to his friends to take the cake slowly so that they could eat it all up like a money willing to eat a banana up on a tree. Mr.Grumpy was angry but he doesn't know what to do. Do you have any ideas ? When Tony saw Mr.Grumpy , his eyes bulged , his jaw dropped , his hands nervous and his ears popped. There was silence for a minute . What could happen next ?
The man on the first picture looks angry because a boy in his class is being silly and annoying,he is in Big Ben. Big Ben is the silliest class in year 3 because they're teacher is always red in the face.
The second picture looks shocked because his teacher is the angriest teacher in the school and he shouts at all the children even if they don't do anything.
Once there was an angry man and he was called Mr Angry,and every day he see's someone he punches them in there face. Once he punched someone,that person dialled 999 and the police. The police came but that man was so strong the police couldn't touch him not even the hulk could touch or hit that horrible and tyrannical man. The next day that man got a job at a office but when he enter'd everyone hided and then his ears puffed like he was about to explode.
Once there was a little man who loved to go on adventures and once he went with his parents,he was really scared but when the monster came the monster got scared of the little boy that was hunting.But when the monster came the little boy was shocked and his mouth opened like he was about to scream as loud as Godzilla. When he was older he went hunting for monsters he saw a cat at the sewers and then he did actually scream like Godzilla It was a shout and a scream like a dinosaur RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!!!
The man in the picture , who is a teacher, is very angry , because a boy called him fat. "EVERYONE SIT DOWN" he shouted, The boy said , " Sir, why are you so fat, you should go to the gym and loose some weight." "What did you just say ?" raved the teacher, as he was puffed up with steam . " That you look very fat" replied the boy, while he was terrified. "DETENTION" yelled the teacher. "But, you will still look fat" called the boy. That is what happened.
Picture 2
A boy, name Kai, that is amazed that a building is so big. Kai" called kai' s mother. "Hurry up" Where ever they were going ,there were extraordinary buildings. Kai's mouth was open wide in amaze.this what happened.
the man always has a bad life because the man is the boss at work and one of his workers are always asking questions about what to do even though he explained it 5 times.
picture 2
The boy was amazed because he a witch turn everybody into a frog .As he watched he got amazed until the witch flew away the spell lasted 24 hours.
As he went into his room his ears puffed with steam, like a huge steam train, while his face was red bubbling with rage and fury. It started when a person called him fat. The person muttered "He needs to go to the gym." The man didn't react as he was in a supermarket.
Picture:2
The child was paralysed from scare as a laptop was playing the sound of a ghost. It was even scarier as the lights were off. The most scary thing was the shadows and the projector which projects a ghost.
The Head Teacher Is As angry as Miss Truchbull And The Little Boy Who Is innocent is paralysed with fear, Terror-Struck And He Feels Like He Is Trapped In the middle of a field with an enraged bull chasing him. The Head Teacher scares All the children and clenches his fist's And tries to hurt and offend the children.
ReplyDeletePicture 1:
ReplyDeleteThe man was furious with his ears puffing with steam because his college was promoted and every one was talking about it. He worked so hard for the promotion.
picture 2 :
The boy was paralysed for a minute ... his mother told him she is expecting triplets he was very shocked.
The man looks stressed and angry because some whon was not lisnining
ReplyDeleteto him. He get’s so angry that he is red and his ear’s popped with smoke.
He looks as some whon did a prank on him, then he got really angry that it looked
as if it was a major problem. It was not normal to the head teacher to look like this.
This boy look’s as he as seen some thing, in a dream and it was a miracle, he was so surprised.
He thought it was remarkable or he sees some think revolting or maybe a tyrannical kidnapping.
Or some think that some whon was in jail or maybe he and his friend’s were in jail. Or around him
there were guards that wonted to kill him. His friends or mum, dad, sister and brother, I was terrified what was happening.
His ears puffed out steam as he found out, that his friends tricked him. They told him, they are going to the meeting, but actually they went to the gallery he always wanted to go.
ReplyDeleteThe little boy was standing outside his bedroom and looked really surprised. His eyes bulged, when he saw photo wallpaper with his favourite super hero on the wall next to his bed. He was really happy and couldn't believe it.
Julia
ReplyDeleteThe man is really angry and the man is feeling sad and disapointed someone has made him feel really angry.He is looking like he is really furiouse about something.His face shows that he is disappointed.
The little boy looks realy suprised of something and he also looks really shoked maybe somebody gave him a big suprise or someone did something cool that he is suprised, shoked the boy doesn,t look like he is sad or un happy maybe someone gave him a suprise the boy has orange hair and i think he is feeling a little bit happy.
1. This is Mr Wright. He seems to be angry and agitated. the toilets in the school have been flooded three times this week. He feels he can’t get on top of this problem. This has made him edgy and flustered. This happens every week of every month. What shall he do now?
ReplyDelete2. This is my friend Marty, he is in my class. Marty is the guy that sits in the back, and when he puts his hand up all you can see is his bright, curly, orange hair. His hair looks like a wig you can get from a party shop. All week he has been bragging on how he will sail through the test. I know that he has been revising for three weeks.
On the board, in our science class is written animals and human. Marty comes running up to me with his mouth wide open. I noticed his face had gone pale and his eye had gone much bigger, as the shock was evident on his face. He looked distressed. He whispered in my ear that he revised the wrong topic and struggled with this one the most!
THE MAN
ReplyDeleteHis ears puffed out smoke, he didn’t like the fact that people are talking and whispering about his size and weight
He has a super annoying brother that stole his clock without his permission. He came downstairs, scolded his brother and left for work. As soon as he got there, his boss immediately called him to his office for a “little chat”. He thought something good is happening like he would get an award or get promoted. But instead, his boss screamed at the top of his lungs” YOUR LATE AND SOO YOUR FIRED!!!!” He felt so bad that no one can explain about how he feels.
THE BOY
He just came back from school, it was his Birthday. His family got everything ready for a surprise. Just before he came in, they switched off the lights so he couldn’t see.
He came in, it was so dark he nearly cried. They put on the lights and shouted “HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!!!”
He was so shocked to see his family celebrating his birthday. when they were cutting the cake, his dog quickly jumped onto him, trying to say “happy birthday” in doggy language. But he forgot he was doing it rather than imagining it. And with a ginormous THUD!!!......
He opened his eyes, he thought he was in heaven. But when he saw one peek at his dog…He was speechless, he saw his dog on the cake. His dog broke the cake into half, even the table it was on. But he kept quite….
BY SHASHI
Emily
ReplyDeleteFirst picture:
He knew he was going to get fired. Why did he do it? He smashed his desk with anger and more sweat trickled down his forehead. His ears puffed with big, grey smoke cloud and his eyebrows narrowed in irritation. His fingernails dug into his palms in rage leaving a mark. His mouth opened wide and a treacherous, loud shriek came out.
Second picture:
He couldn’t believe it! All this time the dog was there and now he was adopted. His eyes were filling with tears with unhappiness. His ginger curly hair was starting to itch a bit. He had to be happy for the dog but it was hard. Later that day, he was shocked trying to think what happened to the poor dog. Whatever happened, he kept looking outside imagining their mouths smiling in the park.
In a school names 'Clever Workers' was a teacher named Mr.Grumpy, the disgusting rude teacher. One day during lunch when Mr.Grumpy went into the kitchen to get his dinner , he found a boy and his friends carefully taking Mr.Grumpy's scrumptious creamy chocolate cake on a silver plate wanting to eat it. Mr.Grumpy's ears burst with steam when he say Tony , his nephew giving instructions to his friends to take the cake slowly so that they could eat it all up like a money willing to eat a banana up on a tree. Mr.Grumpy was angry but he doesn't know what to do. Do you have any ideas ?
ReplyDeleteWhen Tony saw Mr.Grumpy , his eyes bulged , his jaw dropped , his hands nervous and his ears popped. There was silence for a minute . What could happen next ?
The man is cross , filled with rage and fuming also downhearted.
ReplyDeleteby Kashvi
The man on the first picture looks angry because a boy in his class is being silly and annoying,he is in Big Ben. Big Ben is the silliest class in year 3 because they're teacher is always red in the face.
ReplyDeleteThe second picture looks shocked because his teacher is the angriest teacher in the school and he shouts at all the children even if they don't do anything.
Once there was an angry man and he was called Mr Angry,and every day he see's someone he punches them in there face.
ReplyDeleteOnce he punched someone,that person dialled 999 and the police. The police came but that man was so strong the police couldn't touch him not even the hulk could touch or hit that horrible and tyrannical man. The next day that man got a job at a office but when he enter'd everyone hided and then his ears puffed like he was about to explode.
Once there was a little man who loved to go on adventures and once he went with his parents,he was really scared but when the monster came the monster got scared of the little boy that was hunting.But when the monster came the little boy was
shocked and his mouth opened like he was about to scream as loud as Godzilla. When he was older he went hunting for monsters he saw a cat at the sewers and then he did actually scream like Godzilla It was a shout and a scream like a dinosaur RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!!!
Gurjaipaul
ReplyDeletePicture 1
The man in the picture , who is a teacher, is very angry , because a boy called him fat. "EVERYONE SIT DOWN" he shouted, The boy said , " Sir, why are you so fat, you should go to the gym and loose some weight." "What did you just say ?" raved the teacher, as he was puffed up with steam . " That you look very fat" replied the boy, while he was terrified. "DETENTION" yelled the teacher. "But, you will still look fat" called the boy. That is what happened.
Picture 2
A boy, name Kai, that is amazed that a building is so big. Kai" called kai' s mother.
"Hurry up" Where ever they were going ,there were extraordinary buildings. Kai's mouth was open wide in amaze.this what happened.
picture 1
ReplyDeletethe man always has a bad life because the man is the boss at work and one of his workers are always asking questions about what to do even though he explained it 5 times.
picture 2
The boy was amazed because he a witch turn everybody into a frog .As he watched he got amazed until the witch flew away the spell lasted 24 hours.
By Adnan
Picture:1
ReplyDeleteAs he went into his room his ears puffed with steam, like a huge steam train, while his face was red bubbling with rage and fury. It started when a person called him fat. The person muttered "He needs to go to the gym." The man didn't react as he was in a supermarket.
Picture:2
The child was paralysed from scare as a laptop was playing the sound of a ghost. It was even scarier as the lights were off. The most scary thing was the shadows and the projector which projects a ghost.
Nithilan